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Post by ~Ᏸαў ~ on Jan 20, 2011 21:57:04 GMT -5
Imma make you go krazy
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XIDIU
Against the deserted lands, a cloud had suddenly appeared through the hazy heat fog. particles of dust and dirt flew up onto a quadropod of perfectly sharpened daggers, instantly disintegrating in a flame that came from the beast's ebony pillars. It soon seemingly digressed into the beast's bodice, through his very organs, only to soon seemingly explode from the beast's grey nares in a wave of heat, reaching toward the sky taller than any living being, ceasing the moment his orange opticals closed and opened. Through his smocking kissers, the brute smirked in satisfaction. He knew he was powerful. It was his revenge against his kind. for outcasting him, for abusing him, for leaving him.
The land around here had always been the same. Rock piles dotting the barren and dead dusted wasteland. Shrubs occasionally blew through, bouncing as a jackrabbit in the light breezes. Any sound made would eco off the surrounding mountains, even seemingly the smallest whisper. Giant pillars of spikes also dotted the vast area, providing water for the needy animals meekly trying to survive here. A heat haze almost always coated the land in the day, temperatures dropped sufficiently in the night. no rain. no water. no vegetation. no life. There was a reason this place was called the deranged desert.
Suddenly his almost always perfectly hydrated system ran low on hydration. This was hardly ever occurred, only about weekly did the brutes system need the water, more if he did complicated flame tricks. Lucky for him, he knew all the secluded spots that held water, as well as succulent luscious desert flora and tastefull brush. Only a few were held in this place, a even fewer knew about them, only one or two if they knew anything. not him, he had spent 5 years roaming this hell hole place, he knew every nook, every cranny, every animalia, every god damn cactus. Lucky him.
The brute's almost golden coat traveled across the dust, finally hitting the rocks that held one of the succulent places. This was his personal favorite. Bushes hid the entrance, so almost never any intruders. The small trickle of water hit a divide in the rocks, creating a minuscule waterfall, which bleed into a minuscule stream, ending in a small pond, which had a small patch of grass, flora vines climbing up rock walls that surrounded the place. Occasionally a rabbit or two would venture here, which he would allow to drink their fill and eat a bit before kicking them out. But he never tolerated other equines, especially other fire equines from the council, which, of course, when he entered, there was one standing, eating his grass. Flames sprouted inside him as his temper started to build.
Suddenly lifting is vial crown, the equine smirked then spoke. "well, if it isn't the little toxic. My have you grown. Has your toxic blood started to show yet?"
It was Tyrantec . The stud he had fought with as a yearling. shit.
"Well, if you must know, you shitbag, no. Ive gotten quite powerful in the field of flame crafting, thanks" he said as cooly as he could, as flames crawled up his throat, into his pillars.
" Thats nice. I'm sure they haven't though. You've never been given a placing by the council. no lessons. You probably just roam around this place making small fires. you could never fight for Apollo because your a toxic
" YOU of all equines know I'm very capable of fighting with Apollo. who gave you that scar down your banner? thats right ME and i could very well kick your sorry little ass any time i god damn want, you little traitor. Now i suggest you go back to the place you belong, before my fire starts to burn"
" Sure thing Xidiu the little TOXIC ill go to the place I belong. You, know, the fire council. OH WAIT i forgot, you don't. because your a TOXIC. I was just here to stop for a little scout of the area. See you still haven't left. " and with that, he left the clearing, galloping toward the place Xidiu had always desired to call home.
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boom, boom, boom, boom
Tags; Tantalize { Addison } Notes; Heeh. tried to stop myself there. may be edited in the morning ;D he's gonna think tant is ty xD
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Post by ``addee.:D on Jan 21, 2011 8:02:13 GMT -5
WHERE ARE THE FLOWERS? WHERE COULD THEY BE? ARE THEY POSSIBLY HIDING FROM ME? drip drop drip, the once colorful flowers weaved throughout her silken banner, and mane were loosing there paint. the colours of roses, drooled there way down to dead earth, leaving a small trail of rainbow in there wake. COULD IT POSSIBLY BE? water, she needed it, a simple sign of that was that her flowers were slowly dying. what usually was a mosaic of colors, stood a dusty maiden with wings so small they looked like they belonged on a new born pegasus rather then a full grown fluer. she had taken the color of the orchids, with out them she would be a plain ivory with golden pupiless eyes.
WHAT IS IT THAT I SEE, her thoughts were jumbled, quick rushing words in which made no sense, but that was her, she couldn't prevent what she had become, nor could she stop that she was going mad. WRETCHED WHORE , she was just like her mother only she was given hideous looks to top off her slow desent to madness, unlike her mother who was a beautiful Fleur, and her father who was probably handsome. it was then, while she was so wrapped up in thoughts of the past she had managed to stumble into a hidden oasis. at the time, not a single equine was present, her island orchids were placed so perfectly on nearly every brush that it mad her heart swoon. but before she could ever dare to drink there nectar and restore her pelt, she lowered her darkened maw and began to drink.
the cool liquid brought color to her nearly as soon as she had began to absorb it. she had not yet taken her full color, for she needed her flowers sweetness for that, raising her head up she felt the coolness of the water to drip from her lips. QUICKLY she moved towards her flowers, allowed a forked tongue to pull forward between her ivories and into the pink flower. it was then that the sound of another equine startled her, she turned to retreat, only it was to late, another equine stood grazing. stalking into the shadows of the underbrush she watched the two with careful eyes, one a bloody bay who had odd eyes like her own, the other a sandy color. they bickered and argued with each other, Tantalize tried to allow them privacy by drinking nectar softly, and quietly.
tingles coarsed up her spine as her color slowly filled her cheeks and made her feel herself again. she may have been hideous right then, with her startling eyes and nubby wings, but the flowers made her feel BEAUTIFUL it was then in which she had the curtisy to accidently fluttering a wing, really she was just trying to stretch it, but it stil thwacked rather loudly against one of the tropical plants. she would be caught.
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Post by ~Ᏸαў ~ on Jan 23, 2011 18:22:34 GMT -5
XIDIU
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your so damn pretty
Anger pulsed through the stud's veins, turning him bright orange as the fire began to brew once again inside him. Oh how he longed to try out his skills on that good for nothing bastard Ty. How dare that ass enter HIS domain AGAIN? This is his place. Derond Desert. It drives equines who have lingered here to long insane. Unless they were him.
As he cooled down, the orange slowly drained from his bodice. With the other stud gone, he was less irritable. Bowing his intelligent crown, he drank the pure desert water, Recharging his system with a new fire. Sighing, he wondered what he would do that very day. Probably the same thing, roam around, practice, search for feminine souls. The usual. Pawing the ground, he lowered his bodice to roll in the parched earth, itching a spot that had become quite irritated from the antagonizing flies that bit at the beast's muscled bodice.
Without warning, a plant that grew near the west wall of the place shook as if it had been pushed. It was not like that of bird, no. It shook with a temerity of a larger creature. The temerity of another large being. No predators of that vast dwelled in this terra, so only one solution was left. equine.
His pillars ignited. He could deal with this basterd screwing with his life any longer. That stud had every thing. A beautiful fire equine mother, a powerful fire council father. Tar was a stupid, self centered ass hole though, and would see at nothing that the equine that had beat him so many years before never made it to fire council. Walking carefully on the dirt path through the tropical foliage, all his pillars began to hold a flame. His body was heating up so much at that instance, his nares began to spit fire, his banner fading into flame. He was ready for battle. As soon as he found that bitch.
His pupiless orbs searching the area, he landed on the west wall, which was covered in vibrant orchids. cool and vibrant. somewhere a fire equine would not usually hide. Tar would be ignorant to risk burning this desert paradise. fool. Instantaneously, he noticed a large pink object, similar in color to the orchids that grew on the wall, just positioned by the wall. What the hell? stepping closer, he touched the object, careful not to burn it. Then it moved. it had eyes.
Jumping back, his flames terminated as he landed in the crisp hydrogen and oxygen. Perplexed, he stared at the object, which had stood up and started walking toward him. It had legs, and a neck, and a long flowing banner, and a tail, and a. He stopped and stared at its crown. Perfectly chiseled, it had a beautiful form that lead to, too enticing orbs. Yellow as his, they went on forever with no pupil such as his.
This was equine. This was Feminine. This was Beautiful.
Let's remove the space between me and you
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Tags; Tantalize { Addison } Notes; OH SHIT ;D
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Post by ``addee.:D on Feb 7, 2011 18:46:23 GMT -5
WHAT DOES HE SEE, IS IT THE MONSTER I AM FORCED TO BE? the heat of the desert made her thirsty, even though water glimmered before her under the unforgiving sun, she needed NECTAR to keep her from dying. the winter seasons made it hard to live, finding these flowers made her feel lucky, she couldn't eat what others ate, she had to drink the pale lillies making her appear ivory, COLORLESS. it was disgusting, the thought of not holding colors, it made the painted vixen feel as though she were naked, nude. what an awkward thought of being bare, it was like death. it was death. she would easily die without this plants nectar, which made it all the more vital she absorbed what she could from this desert get away.
not only were there no flowers for her to drink in the main lands, but she was not built for the cold, the chilly night tempatures in which would set in over the plains. this was why she travelled into these lands, but even now she would be lost, she didn't know the dangers of the night, ecspecially that of a night on the desert. but those thoughts would have to wait, for the mare was nervous enough about the large brown beast that towered above her frame. shaking fear from her mind she felt rather small at fourteen three, POWERLESS but not afraid as those gold eyes searched hers. it was as though he was seeing something in which startled him from speaking, was her bright colors ugly, did her small infant like wings startle him?
it was an odd feeling that hit Tantalize's stomach, why was she so disturbingly ugly, what genes had made her so.. so unusually hideous? it angered the vixen, and when the brutus made no movement to make converstation with the fae, she couldn't help but turn and run like a startled foal. Fluers didn't like being seen generally, Tantalize's looks just added to her phobia of the other equines hard stares. still as her legs moved like lightning along the sand she could not shake the image of the haunting eyes like her own staring as though he was interested in her, as though he was curious. FREAK, thats all he could be thinking, hell, at best he was wondering why a being as such was alive.
while thinking about the brute the mare hardly noticed that she had entered lands in the desert in which was barren, the ground cracked as though water had once been stored here before it dissapeared into thin air. Tantalize began to wonder what it would be like to fly, with her pillars ,moving so fast it felt as though she really was. it was then she CRASHED , legs tucking under and her rolling head first onto the ground. odd enough it didn't hurt at first, as she stood she was positive that the worst of damaged caused was that she had a scrap on her knee, though as she moved to shake the dust off her bodice she felt the pain of a hundred bees inside of her wing.
optics closing at the sudden pain, she refused to look at her broken wing, instead thought nothing of it as she panted from running. it was dusk, she had been running for that long. Tantalize was shocked as she raised her banner and cursed the gods, numbly and nearly blindly she wandered farther into the desert. how far would it be till she reached water? she refused to whinny, she wanted to SUFFER , that is what she got for running away from a perfectly harmless horse, well maybe not all that harmless, his words towards the other stallion haunted her as she made her way towards the north star, knowing she would never and could never reach it.
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Post by ~Ᏸαў ~ on Feb 7, 2011 20:21:16 GMT -5
You forgot one thing.~~~~~~~~~~~ XIDIU His eyes stared into the being, examining it. The femine being was the color of the flowers se had been presumably feasting on. She had small wings, indicating she had not had enough nutrients that she needed, for they would most likely grow if the femme wanted them too. He then moved on to her face. Her perfectly sculpted forhead ran into intriging eyes that were much like his own, glazed, holding no pupil. Staring into her eyes, he opened his ebon kissers to speak to her.
"Your..."
As his orbs scanned upward from the dirt to perch on her allurong bodice, there was an empty space where the vibrant colors she held should have been. Where had she gone? Perplexed, his crown scanned the oasis, but sensed no movement, no breath. Walking to the wall, he sprung, like that of a cat, onto the thousands of years old rock wall.
Scanning the never ending horizon, he noticed dust flying in the distance, running into the setting sun. Everyone ran from him. Everyone diserted him. But not this time. WAIT! he called, plummeting toward the cracked earth below. Instantaniously, his pillars hit the earth running, blistering toward the horizon, where the mystery femme had ran.
His pillars contracted and retracted, muscles working on gaining speed as he gained power from the perched feel of this place. The sun played with shadows as the sun plunged into the abyss, the creatures of the desert began to creep from their daytime nests. He knew very well what lurked here, and was not going to take the chance of appearing weak. abruptly, he ignighted like that of a torch, flames peeking from his pillars, tail coming aflame. Gaining on the femme, he watched her lurch upward, only to crash into the cracks of the earth. Orbs widening, he gasped, flinching. Hopefully the gods would spare her beautiful perfection this time. As he came upon her, he noticed her wing in an unnatural position, she stood with a grimace on her beautiful face.
Orbs glancing upon her, the stud took a good look at her. She must be terrified. He was still aflame, and a good two to three hands higher than the femme.
Panting, he muttered.
"What. are you doing here?... Normal horses. Dont usually come here. You like. My . Flowers? "
Orbs stared into hers. indicating concern.Your Beautiful. ~~~~~~~ Tags: Tanty Notes: Heres you unedited version to reply to miss addi (: he thinks shes so delish
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Post by ``addee.:D on Feb 7, 2011 20:40:42 GMT -5
T.A.N.T.A.L.I.Z.E i have a heart, i swear i do ,,. - - - - - - - - - - - - -
[/font] CURRENT THOUGHTS ; what does he want? EMOTION ; confused, dazzled
OH ME OH MY LOOK AT THAT , HE IS QUICK ENOUGH TO CATCH THE CAT,. halting rather quickly, she stood stock still watching the glow of the firelight reach her. she didn't protest, or run, her wing causing pain even turning to face the lightened brutus, he was beautiful, it was clear upon his features. she wished to tell him, soothe him, he seemed awfully concerned over her, which left an odd tingling pull in the pit of her stomach. Tantalize didn't welcome the warm fuzzy feeling he brought her, nor did she like the fact that he came after her in the first place. even though she felt completely thankful for the brute, she wasn't sure what to make out of the situation, did he want to talk to her, or was he just confused, or worse blind.
when he spoke chills raised down her back, not really helping the dropping tempatures in which now filled the desert. Fluer's were supposed to live in tropical forests, or at least places where it was warm, freezing winds were not supposed to touch them, but equinopia didn't allow that to happen. instead Tantalize was forced to remain frozen up until summer when tempatures would raise. it wasn't a happy feeling but the vixen liked her home, and wouldn't leave it even if she had the chance to go to paradise. shivering slightly she found her self stumbing over nnothing, it was odd for such a creature to stumble over ground, but Tantalize was the main exception. his words made her head tilt upwards to meet his gaze and tilt sideways.
of coarse she did, they were beautiful like him, and tasted of the season she missed most; spring. it was odd not seeing them covering the island, but she didn't mind the island painted white either. her voice soft and sweet, with a hint of a rasp sopke carefully as though afraid to let herself say somthing unattended. "i like your flowers." there sweet and taste like honey her mind added silently. it was awkward for her to make a conversation, not only that but he actually seemed to want to know why she had travelled to such lands? truelly his curiousity confused her. his entire attitude towards her confused her. there wasn't one thing about this bay stallion that didn't fuzz her brain.
"i am here because of the warmth." and the flowers her mind again added in, she wondered if he was going to carry on the conversation, or if he would live her like others had. could he possibly see something in this mare that others hadn't? shaking her fushia mane she noted the moon was nearly at its highest point in the sky, her flowers opening wide, they glowed yellow and pink, nearly as though his points did when they ignited. sucking in a breath the mare had a sudden fear, what if she was left alone for the night, she was exausted as it was and couldn't run anymore. taking a breath the mare asked a simple and easy question peel from her lips, "i'm sorry to have disturbed you earlier but i must ask, is there a safe place i can rest for the night?" standing tall on wobbly legs she felt as though she was a newborn, standing on the shaky legs of a new beginnings.
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Post by ~Ᏸαў ~ on Feb 9, 2011 21:27:29 GMT -5
XIDIU He examined her, over as she stood. Her wing was bent at an awkward angle, leaning much to far down her beautifully rounded barrel. The stud glanced upon her marvelous eyes, tilting up toward him from her equally as entrancing features. Her voice was just as sweet; it flowed like the rivers run by Poseidon himself. " I Like your flowers " Her kissers simply seemed to mutter in a tone that indicated slight confusion.
After her words, they both stood, sizing each other up, memorizing the shapes of one another. He could feel her endless eyes peeling up and down his heated bodice, sending shivers down a usually hot being. Her banner waved in the soft wind as she gazed upon his unworthy bodice. The beams of the moon highted her stunning fuchsia coat, making her even more alluring in his own mind's view. But the whole meeting was awkward, even a bit uncomfortable. The femmora seemed scared of something, but what? Had she been threatened by someone? Was she a spy?
"i am here because of the warmth." She muttered, glancing at the dirt while she spoke. " Well, I'm afraid you out of luck miss. Its only hot here during the hours of the sun. Other than that, it usually gets quite cold. Now i doubt it gets as cold as it is in the mainlands, but it certainly is cold here. " He pranced, trying to sound kind in telling her she was utterly wrong. What he said was, however, true by means. Here, it could reach temperates of 10 degrees, if they were lucky. And you never wanted to be in the desert when the storms hit. And certainly not if you were a delicate fluer, such as herself. Usually the creatures of the night were out by now, for the moon had risen and the temperatures had begun their decent quite awhile ago. Normally, the great birds of Athena would be out, searching for their evening nutrition. But not tonight. Not a single call was heard across the great plain. Not one single one.
Suddenly, he was jolted from his pondering by the females voice "I'm sorry to have disturbed you earlier but i must ask, is there a safe place i can rest for the night?"
Its quite fine miss. I need to be distracted from this god awful place once in moon, and all Ty does is start unnecessary fights. I guess you were there then, huh? " He felt bad to subjecting this innocent to his temper, for no femme should have ever seen him like that, literally steaming from the auds. Glancing, He noticed the femme glaring at him, awaiting her answer, which is when he noticed her pillars had begun to shake like that of a newborn filly, but the fuchsia maiden was hiding it well. He then remembered the second part of her question.
"Yes, If you follow... "
At that moment, a bit of sand blew onto his crown, causing him to look up in order not to blow his unsanitary mucus all over his new companion. This is when he noticed the clouds. Clouds of sand, far of in the distance, rolling in energy, striking those who had not found shelter. The humm was beginning, the cloud would be on them in a short period of time.
Alert now, he began to frantically think where the closest cave was. Conveniently, it was only a few minutes run away, and hopefully they could make it on time. It was a pile of rocks which held a entrance to a medium cave made years ago by, of all things, a kelpie.
" Quickly, We must hurry to the nearest cave. A storm is nearly upon us, and you nor i will live to see tomorrow if we continue to stand here."
He then began to gallop, racing toward the cave. Illuminating himself so the dam could follow his lead, then remembering she was so tired and cold she could nearly walk.
Racing back, he muttered " Alright, this may get a little hot, but I'm and sincerely sorry. Ill try to keep you at a decent temperature" and with that, the stallion swiftly threw his crown under her barrel, hoisting her onto his broad spine, all in one quick movement. { Bay: (; }
They were then off again, racing for the caves that would shelter them from the demising sands of the DESERT.~~~~~~~~ Tags: Tant { Addison } Words: 737 Notes: Whew. Now that took forever. and OH SHIZZZZ. What is she gonna do?
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Post by ~Ᏸαў ~ on Feb 10, 2011 22:06:33 GMT -5
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Post by ``addee.:D on Feb 11, 2011 18:24:01 GMT -5
T.A.N.T.A.L.I.Z.E but just not baby, when it comes to you ,,. - - - - - - - - - - - - -
[/font] CURRENT THOUGHTS ; what does he want? EMOTION ; confused, dazzled
OH HOT DAMN , A FRIGHTENED LITTLE LAMB, she didn't dislike the feeling, she didn't dislike the touch of his skin, instead she disliked the roar of the cooling air, the fact that she had been lifted into a odd position, and the fact that she was small enough for him to lift. snorting in frustration and pain, the mare allowed herself to be moved throughout the sandy area, her throat buring with thurst. she refused to look back as the roar got louder and the brutus below her faltered in step. taking this as an advantage the mare brought her hind legs down and tossed her front legs up, dismounting him. her legs pounded next to his, not running nearly as fast as before but fast enough that she could be in gate with his step. her wing stung but she hid the pain well.
it was then they reached the cave, not pausing at the entrance she continued running away from the roaring sand and into the darkness, her dim and glowing flowers the only light to guide her. somehow she had managed to get infront of the bay brutus and was now running through the twisting, seeming never ending tunnel- thats when she saw a dull and faint glow before her. skidding toa stop she nearly collapsed again, catching her fragile frame before injuring herself further. golden optics closing, the vixen took a deep breath and looked for the brute. still he was no where to be, had she lost him? shaking her dome carefully, she continued forward toward the growing light.
WILL FINISH..
PS - you didn't add her wings or her flowers.): but thanks anyways.:3
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